On writing class, I saw Adora Svitak from Ted.
It is about a girl who wrote a book.
She talked about the reason children have to teach adults and how the children are special.
She is pretty young, but her speech was good to listen and persuasive. How can she speak well and not mumble? Also, I felt some disagreements from her speech.
Inside her speech, she said children can teach the adults. Also, children have more imagination.
But I don't agree. It is right, but children don't have as much experience as adults. Adults have lots of experience, so adults can teach us from their experiences...
When we grow up, we can also teach well!!
I think we have to wait until we become adults...
Please follow the format given in class (paragraphs) and don't center your text.
ReplyDeletePlease take more care when checking and fixing simple mistakes (spelling, capitals, grammar).
You wrote that children cannot teacher adults because adults have more experience. You also wrote that children have more imagination. Don't you think that if adults can teach with experience, then children can teach with imagination?